Sunday, March 22, 2020

100WC - Week #26 - Kate

I was in Sydney on my yearly visit.  When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment.  When something pulled me back but the hand felt like concrete.  I didn’t remember  falling asleep.  But I must of!
Because I woke up on a seat in the city centre ?   Now in the  place where something pulled me back are colourful statues?  So I had two thoughts:
Either the person that did it put the statues there or it was the statues.
But I think I’m going back to my apartment to pack and go home.

22 comments:

  1. Hi kate!
    How was your holiday?
    your writing was really good!
    From mia

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    1. My holiday was great.
      thanks, I can't wait to read yours
      -Kate

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  2. Dear kate,
    wow on your writing kate it is great having you on the blog still

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    1. Thank you for the comment.
      I really want to read your next story.
      -Kate

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  3. Hi Kate,
    We are thinking about you at school and I realy liked your story.
    From Carla

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    1. Hi Carla
      I really miss the class and you.
      thanks for the comment.
      -Kate

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  4. Kate we mess you and lovely story you've got.

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    1. Dear Chloe
      I can't wait to see you, I miss you to.
      I can't wait to read your next story.
      thank you for the comment.
      -Kate

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  5. did u fall a slepp
    hi kate we miss u hop u came so 😁😁😁

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    1. Phoenix
      correct I did full asleep in my story
      you will see me in 4 weeks
      -Kate

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  6. I kate that story was very cool. here at school in room 4 we only have 18 people in our class Charlie

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    1. Hi Charlie,
      the class must of felt pretty small.
      your stories are really good too.
      -Kate

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  8. Hi Kate,
    Loved your story had did you know it was in Sydney?
    Can't wait till you come back to school!

    From Samara

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    1. Hi Samara
      I new it was Sydney because it had the opera house in the background.
      I can't wait to see you again.
      -Kate

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  9. Hi Kate,
    Good job on your writing.There is only 18 students in our class today lots are missing.
    Miss you,
    Bailee

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    1. Hi Bailee
      I really miss you guys to.
      thanks for the comment.
      -Kate

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  11. Hi Kate,
    Your story is very cool.
    We miss you.
    Madi

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    1. Hi Madison
      I miss you to.
      I can't wait to see you.
      -Kate

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  12. Hi Kate! Have you had a great hoilday? hope you feel great coming back to room 4!
    By joe

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    1. Hi Joe
      I've had a great but quick holiday.
      see you in 4 weeks.
      -Kate

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