Thursday, March 5, 2020
100WC-Week#23-Ayden
One day I went for a walk and totally took no notice of the sign which said watch out for the drop in to the sewer but I kept walking along the sidewalk I wasn't looking and fell down Ouch . I started to yell but no one could hear me so I Pulled out my phone to someone ring but there was no reception so I started to wander around for a ladder out . Finally I found it but there was a problem . It came out on the road I had no chance of getting out there. I'd probably get run over by a car . I'd probably DIE .
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