“MMM, this is so good!” I say to myself as I munch on my banana.
It was Sunday night and I was having a midnight feast. It was all dark, and it was great before everything just went black. I jumped up, and ran to where my light switch was and felt around for it. “OW!!” I yell in pain. I had damaged my finger on my mirror. I felt something very very heavy jump on to me. “HELP!!!” I screeched. No one could hear me, my room was fully sound-proof. It was pushing even more weight on to me...
Thursday, March 19, 2020
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Hi Mia,
ReplyDeleteWhat an excellent way to use the words given. Bravo!
Keep being creative and inspiring others to write!
Best Wishes,
Miss Milena, a teacher at BIS Belgrade