One day I was eating a banana at home when a big heavy car just came crashing into my house and boom the car exploded “whoa I said” “wow this must be a bad day for me” I said.
The next day… “Yes I know yesterday was bad for me but today is a new day I said” now the day went on and on and zzzzzzzz it sounds like he’s asleep zzzzzzzzz yep “whoa I say” as I get off the couch and head to the living room woah that was a big sleep a big kangaroo jumped into my house with a big crack in the roof looks like my big black house is damaged.
Thursday, March 19, 2020
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hi charlie
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