Tuesday, February 11, 2020

100-WC week #20 Xaveika

  I was in the forest one day and I saw something in the air. I couldn't see what it was but it looked like it was flying towards me then my friend came rushing in because she wanted to play with me so mum told her where I was ‘yes!’ I say to myself ‘me and my friend have never played in the forest together before’ so me and her set off. Then I saw that thing again I tried to focus on what it was… as it flew towards us I couldn't see what it was… the end ….


  1. Hi Xaveika that was a great story. i wonder what that thing is flying towards you and your friend ???

    from Taisha

  2. Hi Xaveika i really like you story keep it up from you best frend for ever Ella

  3. Hi Xaveika amazing work keep up the great work!
    From Harry.

    1. hi harry,Thanks for your inspiring comment i'll make sure I keep up the great work-Xaveika

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  4. Hi (Xaveika) i am wadring wtaes fling into u is it a bird is it a anmle from phoenix

  5. Hi Xaveika I wonder what that thing was that was flying toward you and your friend
    Keep up the good work

  6. Hey Xaveika!
    This story is really spooky!. I like the cliffhanger.
    Did you see what the thing flying towards you was?.
    Well done!


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