As dad woke me up I was like “why have you woken me up for.” “We are going duck shooting’. I was like “ok lets go” When we got to the pond dad said to me “have you seen a duck?” I don't know but as it flew towards us I couldn't see what it was dad was like oh really i was like yes the next minute I saw a duck I said yelled to dad “there is a duck.”” Got it” dad said to me. What do you think that thing was, a bird?
Wednesday, February 12, 2020
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hi Carla,I really like how you expressed your feeling about waking up. why did you go duck shooting? what was the bird.? Keep up the good work!-Xaveika
ReplyDeleteHi Carla i like the Duck shooting Story maybe next time don't yell duck because i think you might of scared The duck away.From Jacob
ReplyDeleteHi Carla,
ReplyDeleteI think your story is awesome.
I especially liked the first half.
I also like the part where your Dad woke you up.
Keep writing!
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Madi
Hi Carla,
ReplyDeleteWhat a mysterious story! Congratulations on your writing this week.
Thanks for sharing!