Thursday, February 20, 2020
Charlie - 100WC - Week #21
When I went up to a big mountain I saw this massive yellow giraffe. It went right in front of me. It shook the grown. I was on my mountain bike. I was going very fast. My bike was going very fast and a whole lot of dusty dirt came onto my back. It was so weird . I was not having a good day then I was going so fast that falled off my bike. My leg got on stuck in the chain it hurts so much it is painful. Then some people started to sang it was a pink woman. the end.
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To Charlie,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you put colurs on your story and I would like to go mountain biking to.
From Carla.
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