Thursday, February 20, 2020

Taisha - 100WC - Week #21

Giraffe   Pink Dusty   Sang Painful 
 Lets go to the zoo said mum , can we bring our cousins my sister shouted from the kitchen. Yes we can I will call them right now so I don't forget. So mum called them and they were excited to come. We picked them up from their house. It was good they lived close to the zoo . We walked into the zoo. It was very dusty, maybe a lion  ran past . The first thing I saw was a pink Giraffe. It didn't look very sick. The animal paramedics  put a painful jab I sang to it to make it happy.

1 comment:

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .