Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC-week # 19-Aiden

Today was the day me and my brother were on our way to the dairy in waitoa but for some reason when we got there it wasn't open it was probably shut because there was an earthquake last week and because the building did collapse so instead we went some else after we got home we got in the car and we were on our way to hamilton. When we got there nothing was open? We looked inside all the shops but no one was there that's when I realised that it was a public holiday waitangi day oh dang.

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