Wednesday, February 12, 2020
Charlie - 100WC - Week #20
As I was walking out of the car I saw a massive airplane. It was just leaving in 10 minutes. So I ran to the plane. As it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was… Ah! It was another airplane coming right towards us. I am so scared now. It is very dangerous because It is going so fast. We are very high up in the air. It is awesome fun in the airplane. I am going to Fiji. It is 3 hours away. I am so excited to go to Fiji. I am looking forward to going.
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Hi Charlie.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Charlie keep up the amazing work!
From Harry.
To Charlie Amazing Keep up the good work!
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