Wednesday, February 12, 2020

Charlie - 100WC - Week #20

As I was walking out of the car I saw a massive  airplane. It was just leaving in 10 minutes. So I ran to the plane. As it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was… Ah! It was another airplane coming right  towards us. I am so scared now. It is very dangerous because It is going so fast. We are very high up in the air. It is awesome fun in the airplane. I am going to Fiji. It is 3 hours away. I am so excited to go to Fiji. I am looking forward to going.

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  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2020 at 12:50 PM

    Hi Charlie.
    Great work Charlie keep up the amazing work!
    From Harry.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2020 at 12:53 PM

    To Charlie Amazing Keep up the good work!

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