Monday, February 24, 2020

100WC-Week #22 - Ayden

When I woke  up I had this strange feeling that I had to go to the new house in the neighborhood .Where the old grumpy old lady . Who was a fortune teller even though I thought she was a witch with magical powers . When I got there there was a skull sitting on the front with a crystal ball on it when I opened the door she came and she screamed like a witch  she said ´´get away my house from my our you shall die ´´ she said then I ran away home . I was terrified in fear I almost peed in my pants .

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