Thursday, February 13, 2020
HWC week-20 Jaxon
It was a nice Tuesday morning and i was ready to go to school. I got in the car an mum drove me to school “Bye mum love you!” “love you too bye” I hopped out of the car and walked into school as I was walking into school I saw my friends and ran over to them. “Hey Jaxon.” They said “Hi” I responded we all walked into school then suddenly something started flying at us as it flew towards us I couldn’t figure out what it was... we all spotted it and started running away... “huff huff” “THUMP...”
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