Thursday, February 20, 2020

Emily - 100WC - Week #21

One day I was going to the zoo when I got there  everything was pink including monkeys,lions. It was crazy but I just keep on going on  then I went to the monkey they are not pink at all I think. Next we went to the giraffe pink giraffe. Then it bit me so hard I sang painful and had to go to the hospital and it was very dusty. I had to stay there for two whole weeks. Then when I got out I went back to the zoo and of course I went back to the giraffe and yes it bit me again.

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