Thursday, February 13, 2020
Kate - 100WC - Week #20
It started at a desk being asked to go to war. But at the interview I was fiddling around. When I heard the head captain, yell out John come and join us. The Germans, the mean enemy of the Northlands. We go in tomorrow when the ship arrives! John woke up! Quick the ship’s are here. John was placed underground to make sure that everyone was safe. Wait where are they! Johns 2 youngest siblings got court by the Germans! They were taken to a camp where they were to be slaves. Something was flying ,as it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. They were saved!
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