Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC - Week #19 - Phoenix

My story is  about zombies   once I  was sitting  in my  room.  Then  I  heard something  saying  Brands.  I got  my mingun  out and my rocket launcher and my pistol.   and went to my friend's  home and gave him a gun   when we looked outside and mine heads were spent.  We killed all the zombies   in the world but there were more zombies we ran out of ammo so we ran to the gun story i found a shotgun and my friend found a minigun. I shot 56789 heads off zombies and my friend shot 111 heads off zombies. Then we faced the giant zombies they  were so giant  we all most fanted... to be continued  

4 comments:

  1. Hi phoenix i love the story but next time read before you publish
    And what gave this amazing idea?
    From Jacob

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  2. hi Jacob yes i will read before i writing from phoenix

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  3. Hi Phoenix amazing writing keep up the good work! just read your writing next time. from Joe

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  4. Hi phoenix amazing writing but next time read it before you publish!
    From Harry

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