Thursday, March 19, 2020

100WC - Week #25 - Phoenix

Me and my friends ate a banana.  It was black and heavy and it was a trick it was a zombie.  We ran we grabbed a shotgun  and we did little damage and we all blew the zombies head off  but there were more and we had little ammo.  We ran to a gun shop that the whole back room was filled up to the top top top.  When we were fighting we ran out of ammo so we ran into 100 shops.

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