Me and Dad were loading a truck and it was very heavy. Dad said she is a beast then we are off on the road. Now the load is tipping to one side and Dad said to me did you strap it on. Then charlie said I didn´t remember putting it on. So we pull over onto a side road and we cheek the the load the whole load is to one side that is such a big lean. But now we are off and truck truck is going alot faster than before I love driving in a truck
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