Today at school, I was just working minding my own business when I saw my desk shakes for a second. I just said to myself it's probably just someone jumping on the floor, but then the ground shakes even harder. Then I said now I know that was not someone jumping. gradually, things started to move. Then I realized that IT WAS A EARTHQUAKE! My whole class started screaming! Then my teacher said GET UNDER YOUR DESK EVERYONE!!! So we went under our desk and waited till it stopped. I said this is just a dream...just a dream just a..JOE! WHAT?!
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