They never should have said yes wait a minute do you know how my friends ended up like this??? Well I will tell you. It was one summer day and it was really hot!!! We went to the store to get some cereal because we had run out. So we were walking home and then we saw an ice cream truck and there was a wolf serving it and we went up to him and said hi well my friends did not me anyway. He sed would u like some ice cream i whispered in to my friends ears and sed that there is something off about him and my friend said nah and he sed would you like an ice cream and i sed no thanks and my friend said yes. And then after she liked it and fell over and I couldn't wake her up. Then the wolf came out and picked her up and that was the last time I saw her.
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