Once me, mum and dad were walking on a bridge then dad said should we play I dare you. As mum was still walking down the bridge she said yes. Ok I said so who is going to go first. Mum said she can go first so she did. Ok mum said. I dare you guys to jump off the bridge. Yes we will said me and dad.as we were about to jump off the bridge mum pulled me and dad back on the ground.then in her head she was thinking that… they never should have said yes.
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