One day my bror Zak was playing fortnite and there was 35/100 and I was watching him. He was having a build battle and he had the high ground and the black night was falling down. He put a launch pad down and he tried to regain the high ground but they were exhausted. Luckily my bro was a build pro and he will not stop building until he wins. The black knight my bro won the game battle.
Tuesday, December 4, 2018
100WC Week #13 - Brooklyn
One day my bror Zak was playing fortnite and there was 35/100 and I was watching him. He was having a build battle and he had the high ground and the black night was falling down. He put a launch pad down and he tried to regain the high ground but they were exhausted. Luckily my bro was a build pro and he will not stop building until he wins. The black knight my bro won the game battle.
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I play fortnite too and you need to read over your story to check for spelling mistakes
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