Monday, December 3, 2018
100WC Week #13 - Lucian
We had a strict teacher today and we were having a bush walk. The teacher chose me to be her co captain, I had to warn about prickly bushes or if where going down the mountain steeply. We were going up a mountain and were getting really tired. Me and the teacher managed to get on some flat land, and our teacher looked behind us and realized that the students were lying down on the grass. “Why are you lot lying on the grass?” They all got up and started walking up “But they were exhausted” I said.
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