I was outside sitting by myself looking at the moon. It was cold and dark outside. I didn't really care. I was looking at the moon but I heard a noise. I got up wondering what that noise was….And then I saw it.. It was behind the trees .It was big and tall, it had black fur and glowing red eyes, it had ears like a bunny and very sharp teeth with a human body, With sharp claws. I was scared I fell to the ground And cried it was the only thing I could think about. And I still don't know what it was.
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