Monday, April 1, 2019
100WC - Week #27 - Abby
¨We're almost there Rubs!¨ We had been running to the car, away from the dog that had been chasing us. When we get closer Ruby shouts,¨ but it's the wrong colour!¨ When we hop into the car and close the door we see a family sitting there with a surprised expression on their faces. We hopped into the wrong car!! We hop out the other side of the car and found ours on the side of the pavement. When we get in the car. Mum and Dad had been laughing about the car incident. Mum. Please. Just. Drive.
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