Sunday, April 28, 2019

100WC-Week #28-Brooke



It’s Dad’s birthday and he gets to do anything he likes! And he says we are going on a holiday. 
“I hope it’s a good place" I whisper to my brother.
"Yeah” he replies. My brother doesn’t sound that satisfied I wonder.
“All right time to go!” My Dad shouts.  We are off.
“But where are we going,” I ask my Dad.
"You will see when we get there" he shouts back.  
It was totally crazy we were stepping right into a rocket ship.  
10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 blast off!   
As soon as I step out of the ship I see a swamp dead trees and a marshy land.
This was an alien planet.

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousMay 13, 2019 at 8:32 AM

    Hello Brooke, i really like this piece because the concept of the space ship and you dad’s birthday. This piece could use less run on sentences, spelling mistakes, and punctuation.
    Your friend, Aden

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