Wednesday, April 3, 2019

100WC - Week #27 - Abbie

Yay my Mum is going shopping today and she is buying me a pink floral top for my birthday.  I am so excited for it because I saw it on Cotton On's page on my Mum's phone.
‘’I’m going now honey’’ 
‘’Alright remember to get me that pink floral top that I want.’’
‘’Yup’’ yelled Mum as she flies through the door. 
It takes her about half an hour to come back.
{half an hour later}
Yay she is finally back, I see what she has got. ‘’What!!!!!!!’’ I yell ‘’why is this purple I wanted floral pink’’
‘’Well’’ says mum in a soft voice ‘’there were no floral pink t shirts so I got a purple one for you’’
‘’Mum it’s the but it is the wrong colour!'’

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