Monday, April 1, 2019
100WC-week #27-Liam
Today I was getting a new scooter. I was going to get a Ryan Williams scooter. It was coming today. I told my Dad to order a yellow one because yellow is my favourite colour. My dad said Postman Pat had arrived and I’m like what I didn’t know Postman Pat was still doing his job. That is cool he is taller than I thought he handed me over the scooter in a big box. We went inside and I opened It up but there was one thing, it wasn’t yellow. But It was orange and that is one of my favourite colours but I still love It and I’m very very grateful.
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