Thursday, July 23, 2020

100WC - week #43 - Aiden

We were just taking a normal stroll along the footpath as the ground began to rumble from underneath me CRACK!!  A giant radioactive worm came bursting out of the ground then it began the worm war. I could see buildings CRASHING! down from far away giant worms popping out of the ground knocking buildings down eating cars and us humans. I tried to hop in a hole in one of the worms to find what made the worms radioactive and so big and this is what I found. I saw a giant vain with glowing green gew running out of it. I grab a sample and jump out of the worm. I go to my lab and quickly test the sample to see what it is. KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! I hear noises on my door and I get out of bed and open the door. Its my dad that means that all of this was a dream...

1 comment:

  1. Aiden, good job! The description of sounds were really nice. Keep on writing! J.

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