Dad dad what time is it
It is 9:40 why
Because i have tennis at 10:00 in helmoton
Aug Go get in the car we better go or you will be late
Ok harry up though it starts at 10 past but we need to warm up fist
Do you need tennis
Yes can i get purple once with leopard patterns on it
Ok we will go to the shop now
When we got to the shopI grabbed the Tennis ball that were purple with leopard patterns on them then I played my game and I won yay
Tuesday, July 3, 2018
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Hey Morgan
ReplyDeleteI really like your story because of your topic of going to tennis.
Next time try working on your spelling!
Thanks Keira