Monday, July 23, 2018

Special Prompt #1 by Morgan

One day when I was at school there was a whale and a strange noise coming from behind it.  As I looked over the edge I saw a baby in a basket.  When I went to the wall the baby stopped crying.  Then I saw a note on the basket and the note said "please take this baby home because the parents do not have enough money to look after 50 kids." So I took the basket and took it home to my parents and said "I found this baby behind a wall at school, can we keep him?"


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  1. AnonymousAugust 12, 2018 at 4:06 PM

    i really like the way you ended the story on a Question mark
    and next time you write try being more descriptive in your
    words

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