“So, as I looked over the edge, I saw something that no human had ever seen!” Oh! Silly me I almost forgot to introduce myself! My name is Lilla and I am 7 years old now on with the story…
“I saw something that no human had ever seen it was a BIG HAIRY SCARY MONSTER!!!!!”
“AAAAAHHHHH” I shouted “I SO SAD IT’S GOING TO EAT ALIVE AND I HAD SUCH A LITTLE LIFE!!!!”
“Hehehehe” my sister sister Kat laughed
I was putting on a play to make Kat laugh that’s all I want to do for her!!
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