Monday, July 30, 2018
special prompt #2 by morgan
Once upon a time went I was walking home through the frost I found a door the door was blue when I went close I could see right through it once I got the courage I put my hand through the door then my head then the rest of my body then I looked around and I was in another dimension. In the dimension there was magical creature and fairies I walked up to a fairy and said "Where am I? The fairy said fairy and elf land what's your name and where do you come from my name is ...
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Hello Morgan,
ReplyDeleteI was looking back to the Special Prompt #2 to see if there were some entries needing a comment and randomly chose your story when I found it didn't have a comment. I'm glad I did.
While I can see there were some small errors you missed when editing your story, I found your idea very creative. A doorway to a magical world has the making of a great adventure story. Well done.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia