Magic door
“Dad Dad” Come and read me the magic door book" I said
“I will be there in a minute sweety i’m just finishing off some work” dad said
“Ok but hurry” I said
“Ok where are you up too”? Dad said
“I am up to page 5” I said .
A few minutes later…….
Wow! “That book was great dad thank you can we go for a bush walk tomorrow”? I said.
“Sure sweety maybe when I finish“ Dad said
“Ok thanks good night” I said.
The next day…….
“I’m ready Dad” I said
A few minutes later…..
“This bush walk is amazing” I said
“I know right” Dad said
Wow! “what's that” I said…
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