Monday, October 28, 2019
100WC Week #8 - Abby. Leo gets in trouble.
Leo was being a nuisance. He had blown up a brown balloon and kicked it into my room. “Hey Abby, is this balloon frightening you?” he said annoyingly. “No just go away!” I shouted back. “NEVER!” he bellowed. “Leo stop it or I will tell on you,” I said. Then he stopped and I darted to mum. “Leo is annoying me!” I say and mum replies, “LEO that is a week without your tablet.” Leo wines and I snigger at him. “HA Leo you lost your ipad, you lost your ipad.” I chant. And Leo walked away wining. I won.
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