Tuesday, March 24, 2020

100WC - Week #26 - Madison

I was in Sydney when my family and I walked past these colourful Chinese statues.  Then one of them looked at me, no it can’t have looked at me, it's a statue.  I turn back around to find that it is staring at me.  
“Mum,” I say, “That lonely purple statue in the middle is staring at me.”
“Don’t be silly,” she says.
“I’m not being silly,” I say, getting nervous.
I turn around again and find that it is still staring at me,  “Look,” I quickly say to  Mum.  She turns around and there is no purple statue there.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Madison
    I really like the part when your mum thought your being silly.
    Did you know where the purple statue went?
    -Kate

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  2. i Madison it is Ella i really like the part wen you dident know where the purple statue went and i miss you from Ella

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  3. hi madison that story was very good how is it getting on from charlie

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  4. hi madison do you no were the purpie statue went i hope the cvde19 over so we can mate a gene

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