A famous family named the Jacksons just wanted to get away from all the pop ratsey and have a nice spring break away at Hawaii . But what they didn’t know is that they had fans everywhere as I turned my head the world spun. They’ve just got off the plane and are hushering through the airport to try to find their luggage. Once the people in that airport noticed it was the jacksons they went crazy they were like “can I have your autograph” “ can I have your selfie pleassssssssse” and that's when they realize they are already on vacation they live there vacation.
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