Thursday, August 29, 2019

100WC - Aug 19 (9) - Brooke

Bang! The gun shot fired I couldn’t take it anymore, so I just ran away from the horrible place. I had been invited to watch the duck shooting going on near my Pop’s farm. But I didn’t like it how the ducks suddenly dropped to the ground.

Suddenly I slipped on the wet grass, and ended up at one of the shooters feet.“Hey!” he shouted after me, as I started to run again. But out of nowhere another shooter blocked me with his arm.“Hey!, you should be watching this” he said as he did another fire of his gun.

“No” I shouted back.

“Come on, this is a duck, we can eat this.” he laughed as he said it to me.

Just because it is doesn’t mean it should be” I shouted at him as I finally broke free from his grasp and ran away…………...


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