Tuesday, August 13, 2019

Aug 19 (7) - 100WC- Brooke


Rain was falling onto my jacket as I found myself lying on a dusty mat now wet because of the rain. Where am I? I asked myself, this place was unfamiliar to me. So I decided to take a look around I padded over to the edge of the small space I was in.

Suddenly I slipped and found myself lying with my belly on the ground and my face hanging over the edge as I turned my head, the world spun, I quickly heaved myself off the wet ground and walked away.After that I had realised that I was on the top of a building. How do I get off this I panicked.

Bang! I jumped up scared as the normal world came back to me, I was lying in my bed with my blankets pulled over my head. I sighed with relief, it was just a dream.

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