Thursday, August 22, 2019

August 19 (8) - 100WC - Caitlyn

I sailed through the light breeze and turquoise water quietly  looking around suddenly I saw what I thought was coming towards me awwww I scream pirates  it can't be it is just my little swimming pool the pool was turning yellow I might have accidentally wet myself even though I was already wet I hope you get what I mean anyway let’s get back story the pirates were coming towards me getting closer and closer until I realized that it was just my dad dressed up I will get you back I yell I suddenly get another vision and there were tropical cats fly around and lots of flying pigs .

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