“Hey dude take a shot of this while I’m
pretending I’m holding the moon.” said to his partner. “okay I’ll take a shot
said the photographer. Later the photographer got the photo and he and his
partner went to their boss and they both said “Hey boss we found our perfect
album and it’s was 100% sure is perfect” calm down and please one at a
time okay” said their boss politely “we found our perfect album and put it
around the world” said the photographer. 1 hour later… the album was been post
and it was a success day.
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