Sunday, August 11, 2019

august 19 (7) Liam

  • ANNABELLE
It was 3:00am in the morning I was walking down my hallway to get a drink. While I was walking I heard something that sounded like a little girl laughing. As I turned my head it felt like the world spun there was a little annabelle doll lying down on the floor laughing. I ran to my room and locked the door the laughing stops…...  I open my door BAMMMMM she is at the front of my door with a she cut my leg and damn it felt like a but check on a stick… I call 111 they come and arrest the doll but i was confused because its a doll.

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