Sunday, August 11, 2019
Genevieve - Aug 19 7 - 100WC
I wake up in an unfamiliar place, it’s a bedroom but not mine? I was confused, so I rushed out of the bed and ran out the window or that was my plan but as I turned my head, the world spun I was somewhere new I was in the middle of the ocean but on a cruise ship. “Oh this is nice!” I said in my head then I got a terrible feeling in my stomach and the ship started to feel uneven, we were sinking. I panicked when I I knew what was happening, I needed to turn my head, so I did and I was back at home in bed and I had just woken up.
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