Sunday, August 4, 2019

100WC - Isabella Dryland

I was walking in the woods when I heard something that sounded like a baby crying, it was soft to start with but as I got closer it got louder and louder until it stopped. Suddenly I turned around, I heard them before I saw them they looked a bit like goats but they only had two legs and they spoke in Latin. They started to walk towards me then I saw the baby behind them in a pot. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me to the baby I grabbed her and ran home. My Auntie Z told me to take a buttermilk bath and try not to think about the things in the woods. That night I heard knocking on my window, it was them…..

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