A gasp of the moonlight ,The sun coming out and the moon is going down the man stealling the moon has arrived.
All the gardens grooming and all the witches brooming , the suns now glowing and the moons almost gone.
Everyone's playing and singing songs,The students are good no yelling from the teachers, everything is quiet a part from…….
The man stealing the moon he is ripping and trying to get the moon .
The night has come and the moon has gone everyone is looking around there is a little shadow that they all start to follow but when they get to that shadow and man that stole the moon has gone .
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