Once in a really hairy land there lived a volcano,a banana and a purple swimming pool.They were all friends until a storm came it washed all their happiness away and they all started fighting.Banana went to a wise wizard and asked him how he and his friends could get back together.The wizard said to listen to his friends ideas and have fun with them . OK said Banana I will.So the next day Banana went to his friends and listened to their ideas then they were all friends again!
Thursday, July 25, 2019
Special prompt week#4-Emma
Once in a really hairy land there lived a volcano,a banana and a purple swimming pool.They were all friends until a storm came it washed all their happiness away and they all started fighting.Banana went to a wise wizard and asked him how he and his friends could get back together.The wizard said to listen to his friends ideas and have fun with them . OK said Banana I will.So the next day Banana went to his friends and listened to their ideas then they were all friends again!
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Hi Emma
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting 100WC you have written. I like the idea of a storm washing away the happiness. The wizard certainly gave good advice!
Mrs P, Team 100WC
Wellington, New Zealand