Thursday, July 25, 2019

Special Prompt #4 - Kate


“Hello Class we are going to be describing your imaginary monster friend, who would like to go first?”

 “Okay Frankie, your hand was up the quickest, you can go first.” 

“Yay!” Frankie said, as she went to stand up, “my monster is”….” Blue and purple, she smells like cookies, and she loves to bake.”

“ Well done Jimmy you're next.” 

“My monster is purple, and hairy, he likes to go swimming, he likes broccoli, and he lives in a volcano. He has a pet banana”

 “Ummmmm that interesting, what is his hobby?” Miss Smith asked.” He likes to smell flowers.” that's nice, said Miss Smith, but quite weird,” she whispered .







1 comment:

  1. Joel (Team100WC)July 27, 2019 at 3:03 PM

    This is a very interesting use of the prompt words, very creative. One thing to watch out for is in the last paragraph where the speech marks get a little confusing, but otherwise your use of speech is really good.

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