Have you ever seen a imaginary animal that is long like a Whale, has a tail like a Mermaid, has wings like a Dragon, legs like a Frog and head like a Jellyfish? Well I have, it lives in the Waterland and can be found in the Iceland. They love the cold and some heat but not too much. They also love playing with Seaweed, Fishes, Seahorses, Turtles, Sharks, Dolphins and many more sea creatures. Would you like to meet her? If she doesn't like you beware she might bite! But first I want to ask you do you have an imaginary favourite animal?
Thursday, May 17, 2018
100wc #31 Rita
100wc # 31
Have you ever seen a imaginary animal that is long like a Whale, has a tail like a Mermaid, has wings like a Dragon, legs like a Frog and head like a Jellyfish? Well I have, it lives in the Waterland and can be found in the Iceland. They love the cold and some heat but not too much. They also love playing with Seaweed, Fishes, Seahorses, Turtles, Sharks, Dolphins and many more sea creatures. Would you like to meet her? If she doesn't like you beware she might bite! But first I want to ask you do you have an imaginary favourite animal?
Have you ever seen a imaginary animal that is long like a Whale, has a tail like a Mermaid, has wings like a Dragon, legs like a Frog and head like a Jellyfish? Well I have, it lives in the Waterland and can be found in the Iceland. They love the cold and some heat but not too much. They also love playing with Seaweed, Fishes, Seahorses, Turtles, Sharks, Dolphins and many more sea creatures. Would you like to meet her? If she doesn't like you beware she might bite! But first I want to ask you do you have an imaginary favourite animal?
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I really liked how you started your story and how you described what your imaginary animal is. maybe next time you could try to put a cliffhanger at the end.
ReplyDeleteFrom Olivia
I like how your story started and ended very creative
ReplyDeleteRita good job
Rita i like your mysterious animal that has a whales tail, wing like a dragon, frog legs and head like jellyfish, it makes me laugh and some descriptive words.
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