My package
One day I was waiting for my package to arrive. I waited all day for my package to arrive then I went inside for dinner.
After dinner I went to the mailbox to see to see if my package had been dropped of during my dinner. But my package had not been dropped off I went to bed.
When it was the morning I looked under my bed and there was my package. My sister came into my room and said “oh, you have found your package that I put under your bed.” “When did it arrive” I said.
by Natasha
Natasha liked the way you hooked me in with how you waited all day and in the morning the package finally came and it was under your bed.
ReplyDeletethanks Nandani
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Hi Natasha
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this because i know how it real when your sister hides your things
next time read over and make sure you have not put words in 2 times
that was a great great story
ReplyDeletethat was a exalent story
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