“Mom come on will be late,” said Lara. “Shut up Lara let Mom take her time,” said her twin sister Stella. “Don’t talk to your sister like that, where going come on where’s Max, he is already in the car.” “Stella can you please look up the way to the Grand Canyon”. “Ok Mom.” “So go right then left o wait no were lost,” said Stella. ‘Stella,’ “but I didn’t understand the instructions Mom,” said Stella.
BY ISABELLA.D
Wednesday, May 23, 2018
2 comments:
I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .
I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hi issy I think you need to work on your grammer.
ReplyDeleteI like how you put the bit when the mum got really angry and said stella great job
ReplyDelete