Art problem at school
Today we are going to do some art to do with your face. So you are going to go back to your desk and draw the shape of your face. In ten minutes I’ll give you the next instruction. So off we went and draw their face then they draw their face feature and hair. As the teacher went around she saw that I had done no work and she asked me why I have not done any work she said you will stay in at lunch and do it. But I didn’t understand the instructions…
Thursday, May 24, 2018
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